英文自我介绍,My name is xxx.I'm xx years old.I'm in xxx school now.'m a carefree and easy-going girl.I'm interested in computer.If I'm free,I enjoy reading books.And I like seeing films very much,too.This is me.I hope that you can like me.

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英文自我介绍,
My name is xxx.I'm xx years old.I'm in xxx school now.'m a carefree and easy-going girl.I'm interested in computer.If I'm free,I enjoy reading books.And I like seeing films very much,too.This is me.I hope that you can like me.

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没毛病，很好

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seeing换成watching更好

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还可以啦。不改也没关系。

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其他地方还好，easy-going（仅限于外国人）在英文中是个贬义词，不大合适，如果是和外教交谈，换一个词吧

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语法上没什么错误,我给你稍微改了一下
My name is xxx.I'm xx years old. I'm studying in xxx school now.I'm a carefree and outgoing girl.I'm interested in computer.If I'm free,I enjoy reading books;I like to see films very much too.This is me. I hope you can like me(口语化).
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没问题.
但是,最后一句; I hope that you can like me.可以修改为;I hope you can give me the chance to present myself.Thanks.

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carefree还有不负责任的意思，直接用happy就可以了
If I'm free改成When I'm free好一些
This is me.不如This is all about myself.

英文自我介绍,My name is xxx.I'm xx years old.I'm in xxx school now.'m a carefree and easy-going girl.I'm interested in computer.If I'm free,I enjoy reading books.And I like seeing films very much,too.This is me.I hope that you can like me.

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