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是短文改错吧，我改的，给你参考一下~
1.when you win a contest 中的 a 改成 the
2.It can difficult to know 中的can 后面加be
3. when you win a contest 中的 win 改成won
4.Finding a time 中的 Finding 改成Find
5.when you can speak at them 中的at 改成 about
6.Calmly explain what their comments made you feel 中的made 改成 make
7.They may not realize that their comments bothered them中的them改成you
8.You could talk with your parents about this as well as中的最后一个as删掉
9.Your parents love you very much but want to hear what is on your minds中的but 改成and
10.They are like to have some good ideas to share with you.中的are 删掉

这是一道改错题,还是修改作文?
我当它是一篇需要修改的作文了,以下是我改过之后的：
I am sorry to hear that your friend said something that borthered you when you won a contest.It can be difficult to know what to do when your friend do something like that.Perhaps you could talk with your friend about it when it is convenient to speak to them and calmly explain how their comments made you feel.Because they may not realized that their comments bothered you .You can also talk with your parents about it if it continues to bother you.Your parents love you very much and want to hear what is on your mind.They are like to have some good ideas to share with you.