英语改错 十处错误,准确点i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'ideas to affrct your normal life.if youdo want to lose wejght,it is good idea to do it by taking more will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on diteing.i hope my advices will be helpful

英语改错 十处错误,准确点
i have received and read your letter,in which you said you want to lose weight by dieting.it is natural that young girls at your age hopes to look beaautiful.and in my opinion,health is more important than beanty do not let others'ideas to affrct your normal life.if youdo want to lose wejght,it is good idea to do it by taking more will help you on your studies and help us get over difficulties on diteing.
i hope my advices will be helpful to you and i'm looking forward to hear from you soon.
同学考试呢，希望给的是准确答案~