请帮忙检查一下英语语法错误This thesis consists of three parts: the first one is the introduction, this part is mainly introduces the development and significance of the positive definite matrix.

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请帮忙检查一下英语语法错误
This thesis consists of three parts: the first one is the
introduction, this part is mainly introduces the development and significance of
the positive definite matrix.

This thesis consists of three parts: the first one is the introduction, this part is mainly introduces the development and significance of the positive definite matrix.
1 如果用冒号的话,就得把三个部分全列出来
2 introduction后面是另一句话,用句号隔开
3 有is就不要加动词,有动词就不要用is
完整: This thesis consists of three parts, and the first one is the introduction. This part introduces the development and significance of the positivedefinite matrix.

This thesis consists of three parts: the first one is the
introduction, WHICH mainly introduces the development and significance of
the positive definite matrix.