英语翻译原句:近日,镉超标大米风波持续发酵,不仅导致湖南等地大米销路遇阻,更让公众对农田污染给百姓餐桌带来的威胁有了新的担忧.译句:Recently,as the incident of cadmium in rice exceeding the standard keeps spreading,it does not only cause the rice sale in Hunan area meeting resistance,but also adds on public concerning for the threat of farmland contamination to the masses.有什么要修改的地方?

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英语翻译
原句:近日,镉超标大米风波持续发酵,不仅导致湖南等地大米销路遇阻,更让公众对农田污染给百姓餐桌带来的威胁有了新的担忧.
译句:Recently,as the incident of cadmium in rice exceeding the standard keeps spreading,it does not only cause the rice sale in Hunan area meeting resistance,but also adds on public concerning for the threat of farmland contamination to the masses.
有什么要修改的地方?

but also adds on public concerning for the threat of farmland contamination to the masses.改成but also makes public feel more threatened by the farmland contamination to the masses.