我自己写的短文,找错误lt was a sunday afternoon.l did math homework at home.The math homework it's very diffcult.When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me.He wanted play football with me .l like playing football very much.But now,l had to do my math homework.l said to Tom," l'm so sorry,l had to do my homework.Maybe antother time".Finally,Tome walked home in slience
我自己写的短文,找错误
lt was a sunday afternoon.l did math homework at home.The math homework it's very diffcult.When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me.He wanted play football with me .l like playing football very much.But now,l had to do my math homework.l said to Tom," l'm so sorry,l had to do my homework.Maybe antother time".Finally,Tome walked home in slience
The math homework it's very diffcult-->the math homework is very diffcult.
When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me--> while i was doing my homework,my best friend Tom was talking to me.
l like playing football very much-->liked
l'm so sorry, l had to do my homework-->had改成have
lt was a sunday afternoon. l did math homework at home. The math homework is very diffcult. When l was doing math homework, my best friend Tom talked to me. He wanted play football with me . l like playing football very much. But now, l had to do my math homework.l said to Tom," l'm so sorry. l had to do my homework. Maybe next time". Finally,Tome walked home in slience.
原文：lt was a sunday afternoon. l did math homework at home. The math homework it's very diffcult. When l did math homework. My best friend Tom talked to me. He wanted play football with me . l like playing football very much. But now, l had to do my math homework.l said to Tom," l'm so sorry, l had to do my homework. Maybe antother time". Finally,Tome walked home in slience
修改：lt was Sunday afternoon. l did my Math homework at home. The Math homework is very difficult. When l was doing the homework, my best friend Tom told me that he wanted to play football with me . l like playing football very much. But l had to do my Math homework first.So I said," l'm so sorry, l had to do my homework. Maybe antother time". Finally,Tome walked home in disappointed.
The math homework it's very diffcult-->the math homework is very diffcult.
When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me--> while i was doing my homework,my best friend Tom was talking to me.
l like playing football very much-->liked
l'm so sorry, l had to do my homework-->had改成have
这样就对了
The math homework it's very diffcult:改为:the math homework was very diffcult.When l did math homework.My best friend Tom talked to me.改为:when I was doing math homework,my best friend Tom talked to ...