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My point of view of lecture on campusThere is on denying the fact that there are many lectures on our campus.They can be mainly divided into three groups：lectures on professional knowledge ,on job se...?帮你改了啊it exposed to seas of knowledge, college students may lost their orientation, even don't know their priority.这句为什么加个it？sorry,看错了,不用加it不好意思请问你改了哪里我真的没看出来My (point of view) of lecture on campusThere is on denying the fact that there are many lectures on our campus. They can be mainly divided into (three) groups：lectures on professional knowledge , on job seeking , even dating and love . Actually, (colorful) lectures have gained increasing popularity among college students.(Although) lectures supply us with many advantages , they also have some defects which can't be neglected. In the first place, some lectures which (don’t make sense for) college students may cost them too much time, and distract them from study. In the second place, exposed to (the sea) of knowledge, college students may lost their orientation, even don't know their priority. As far as I'm concerned, I believe lectures on campus are helpful to us. As college students, study is our priority. If we still have extra energy after mastering our school work, we should learn more knowledge from lectures, only in this way, can we become a all-sided (students).