帮忙看看GRE作文的语法错误3Actually,maybe we couldn’t distinguish the level between the human and machine in another area.Nothing can be more evident than that just when human use machine to complete a common affair.Admittedly,the work that mathematics does,called statistics,during which the knowledgeable man reckon and then use software to deal with mathematic datum,appear that human and machine are making their competences in common area.Can we give an bright s

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帮忙看看GRE作文的语法错误3
Actually,maybe we couldn’t distinguish the level between the human and machine in another area.Nothing can be more evident than that just when human use machine to complete a common affair.Admittedly,the work that mathematics does,called statistics,during which the knowledgeable man reckon and then use software to deal with mathematic datum,appear that human and machine are making their competences in common area.Can we give an bright sense that which one is more superior?I think not.
In sum,for the most part that need human’s subjective judgments human could appear their talent.In fact,machine won in the accuracy and efficiency during working.But,when we use machine to gain a work,whether the human or the machine is cleverer we can’t estimate.

remove the in the end of the first line;
I think not (that's Chinglish)-----I don't think so;
change an to a in the 8th line;
add "," after judgments
last sentence-----we can not estimate whether human or machine is cleverer.