大家帮忙改一下英语作文The Shanghai world Expo Good mrning,Ladies and gentlemen. Listen,the Shanghai 2010 Expo is really close.I feel very exciting.The world give us the chance and we will give the world a surprise.We must do our the best to be good hosts. What should we do? I think we should understand that some knowledge of the Expo,such as the mascot of the Shanghai Expo--HaiBao.It looks like a chinese character "人",it means the people is foundation of
大家帮忙改一下英语作文
The Shanghai world Expo
Good mrning,Ladies and gentlemen.
Listen,the Shanghai 2010 Expo is really close.I feel very exciting.The world give us the chance and we will give the world a surprise.We must do our the best to be good hosts.
What should we do?
I think we should understand that some knowledge of the Expo,such as the mascot of the Shanghai Expo--HaiBao.It looks like a chinese character "人",it means the people is foundation of urben life.
I have a dream,the dream isthe green Expo.I wish "no pollution"on the earth to reflect "better city,better life".So we should act now to protect environment.And we should study hard to learn more and moue knowledye.
That's all.Tanks for your listening.
希望大家给我改改,明天就演讲了!
原词-修改后的词
exciting-excited
give-gives
将understand改为know.etc,去掉understand后的that
将"人"后的"，"改为"and"
people后的is改为are，people前的the去掉
I wish "no pollution"on the earth to reflect "better city,better life".改为I wish that "no pollution"on the earth will embody "better city,better life".
now-how
moue-more
exciting换成excitedgive换成givesthe best去theunderstand后的that去掉人后的it换为whichprotect后加the
有挺多语法的错误,帮你改了.
Good mrning,Ladies and gentlemen.
Listen!The opening of the Shanghai 2010 Expo is approaching soon.I feel very excited.The world gives us the chance and we will give the world a surprise.We must do our the best to be good hosts.
What should we do?
I think we should equip ourselves with the knowledge of the Expo,such as the mascot of the Shanghai Expo--HaiBao.It looks like a chinese character "人",which means that the people is the foundation of urban life.
I have a dream,the dream is a green Expo.I hope for "no pollution"on the earth to reflect "better city,better life".So we should act now to protect our environment and we should study hard to learn more and more knowledge.
This is all,thank you for listening.