这句话语法有误吗,若错的话,要怎么改The machine has fantastic looking,and is clean and tidy ,up to the healthy standard of foodstuff.

问题描述:

这句话语法有误吗,若错的话,要怎么改
The machine has fantastic looking,and is clean and tidy ,up to the healthy standard of foodstuff.

语法没有太大错误,不过句子是很“中式”的。改成下面的如何:
With a fantastic outlook, the machine is clean and tidy and is up to par with sanitation standards for foodstuff.

是噢..
感觉写的不是很妥当
是按照汉语直接翻译过来很生硬
参见上面两者都可以

用look没问题,looking不合适,总体上确实太中国味了!

润色:
This machine is in good shape. It meets the health standard of food refinement.

looking是形容词,改成look吧