帮忙修改此篇英语小短文!在线等,谢谢!Sunday,November 28, 2010 sunny Today,I’m had a great time.Sunday，November 28, 2010 sunnyToday，I’m had a great time. I made strawberry fruit salad at home. Do you want to know how make strawberry fruit salad？Let me tell you .First，wash some strawberries . Then cut them into small pieces. Put the strawberries into the plate. Next，pour in a cup of yogurt and one teaspoons of honey. Finally，mix them all up. Great！Now make your delicious
帮忙修改此篇英语小短文!在线等,谢谢!Sunday,November 28, 2010 sunny Today,I’m had a great time.
Sunday，November 28, 2010 sunny
Today，I’m had a great time. I made strawberry fruit salad at home. Do you want to know how make strawberry fruit salad？Let me tell you .
First，wash some strawberries . Then cut them into small pieces. Put the strawberries into the plate. Next，pour in a cup of yogurt and one teaspoons of honey. Finally，mix them all up.
Great！Now make your delicious food ！
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Sunday, November 25, 2010 (SUNNY)
I had a great time today. I stayed home and make some strawberry fruit salad.
Do you want to do it yourself? Let me teach you.
First, wash some strawberries; cut them into bite-size cubes and place the in a bowl.
Next, mix a cup of yogurt and 1 teaspoon of honey and pour in the strawberries.
Then mix it all up, and there is your tasty strawberry fruit salad ready to eat.
Sunday，November 28, 2010 sunny
Today，I had a great time. I made strawberry fruit salad at home. Do you want to know how to make strawberry fruit salad？Let me tell you .
First，wash some strawberries . Then cut them into small pieces. Put the strawberries into the plate. Next，pour in a cup of yogurt and one teaspoons of honey. Finally，mix them up.
Great！Now enjoy your delicious food ！
Sunday,November 28,2010 sunnyToday,I had a great time.I made strawberry fruit salad at home.Do you want to know how to make strawberry fruit salad?Let me tell you .First,to wash some strawberries .The...