真是有麻烦到您了!帮我看看我的文章还有要改正的地方吗?My favorite mode of transportationThere are many means of transportation in the world,such as：trains,cars,planes and ships .These ways are convenient and cheap.However I like cycling the most.Cycling is the world's most common mode of transport.Cycling can help you to keep health and build muscle.Over-weight people can lose their weight by cycling.And it is important that cycling is green and does not pollute the air .When w

可以啊，不过呢！用中文读有点不通！我来翻译一下：我最喜欢的运输方式吧
　　有许多的交通方式在世界上,如:火车、汽车、飞机和船只。这些方法方便、便宜。但是我最喜欢骑自行车。
　　骑自行车是世界上最常见的交通工具。骑自行车能帮你保持健康和肌肉。体重超重的人会失去他们的体重骑自行车。它是很重要的,骑自行车是绿色的,不污染空气,当我们骑自行车旅行,我们可以呼吸新鲜的空气,享受美丽的日
。帮你改你下：我最喜欢的运输方式吧
　　在这个时间上有很多交通工具,如:火车、汽车、飞机和船等一些。这些方法方便、便宜。但是我最喜欢骑自行车。
　　骑自行车是世界上最常见的交通工具。骑自行车能帮你保持健康和肌肉。体重超重的人会失去他们的体重骑自行车。它是很重要的,骑自行车是绿色的,不污染空气,当我们骑自行车旅行,我们可以呼吸新鲜的空气,享受美丽的太阳
英文就是：I like the mode of transportation of it
In this time have a lot of traffic tools, such as: trains, cars, planes and ships and so on some. The method is convenient, inexpensive. But I like to ride a bicycle.
Riding a bike is the most common in the world of transportation. Riding a bicycle can help keep you healthy and muscle. Overweight people will lose their weight to ride a bicycle. It is important, riding a bike is green, air pollution, when we ride a bicycle trip, we can breathe fresh air, enjoy the beautiful sun

fit 有 healthy 的意思，用一个就可以了
另外，外语和中文不一样，所以多用倒装句比较好
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Cycling is the world's most common mode of transport
可以写成 The most common mode of transport in the word is Cycling

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谢谢你又想我提问.喜欢我的答案的话：My favorite mode of transportationThere are many means of transportation in the world,such as：trains,cars,planes and ships .These ways are convenient and cheap.Howe...