英语改错,（共10处）Xiao Ming fell sound asleep on sofa with the TV on,His mother couldn't help shout at him after reminding him for such many times.There were many reasons for environmental phenomenon .without the cultivation of good habits and the aware of environmental protection ,people may easily commit mistakes.And the lack in school education also contributes a lot to this phenomenon.For my perspective ,it's vital important to call on the government or
英语改错,（共10处）
Xiao Ming fell sound asleep on sofa with the TV on,His mother couldn't help shout at him after reminding him for such many times.There were many reasons for environmental phenomenon .without the cultivation of good habits and the aware of environmental protection ,people may easily commit mistakes.And the lack in school education also contributes a lot to this phenomenon.For my perspective ,it's vital important to call on the government or citizens to take action immediately .Everyone’s effort in daily life may lead a huge step forward in building an energy saving and environment protecting the society .I Firmly believe that with our incredible energy and great efforts,we will finally make it.
fell sound asleep 不对，应该是fell asleep soundly
after reminding him 应该是after having reminded him
couldn't help shout at him 应该是help shouting
for such many times该是for so many times
the aware of environmental protection 应该是he awareness of environmental protection
And the lack in school education 不加the
it's vital important 应该是vital就是important的意思，重复了
effort in daily life may lead a huge step forward 应该是lead to
Firmly首字母小写
For my perspective 应该是From my perspective
building an energy saving and environment protecting the society 最后加一个the什么意思？去掉the 还有energy-saving，environment-protecting中间符号别漏
这典型的中式英语除了语法错之外句子表达别扭到了极点，不是老外能看的。。。
望采纳，谢谢
fell sound asleep 不对，应该是fell asleep soundly
after reminding him 应该是after having reminded him
couldn't help shout at him 应该是help shouting
for such many times该是for so many times
the aware of environmental protection 应该是he awareness of environmental protection
And the lack in school education 不加the
it's vital important 应该是vital就是important的意思，重复了
effort in daily life may lead a huge step forward 应该是lead to
Firmly首字母小写
For my perspective 应该是From my perspective
building an energy saving and environment protecting the society 最后加一个the什么意思？去掉the 还有energy-saving，environment-protecting中间符号别漏
我也不会
修改过的地方标了数字了，一共10处。
Xiao Ming fell sound asleep on 1 a sofa with the TV on. His mother couldn't help 2 shouting at him after reminding him for 3 so many times. There were many reasons for environmental 4 phenomena .5Without the cultivation of good habits and the6 awareness of environmental protection, people may easily commit mistakes. And the lack 7of school education also contributes a lot to this phenomenon.8 From my perspective , it's 9vitally important to call on the government or citizens to take action immediately .Everyone’s effort in daily life may lead a huge step forward in building an energy saving and environment protecting the society . I 10firmly believe that with our incredible energy and great efforts, we will finally make it.
1.asleep改为sleep 2.on改为in 3.shout改为shouting 4.去掉for 5.aware改为awareness 6.the改为a 7.For改为From 8.去掉vital或important 9.lead加to 10.去掉the