【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seeing him.Ther are talking about the thief with a policewoman .Then they are all going to the bus station and catching the thief .The thief is crying.看看有没有什么语法上的错误和用词不当.明天要交.9点之前.=W= 真的很着急

【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法
One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seeing him.Ther are talking about the thief with a policewoman .Then they are all going to the bus station and catching the thief .The thief is crying.
看看有没有什么语法上的错误和用词不当.明天要交.9点之前.=W= 真的很着急