帮我看看这段英语有问题吗?We saw the sea.The sea was really magnificent.In the morning We played at the seaside.In the afternoon we collected shells.They were beautiful,we like there very much.Then I climbed the mountain.We got home at twenty thirty.这几句话有没有问题?

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帮我看看这段英语有问题吗?
We saw the sea.The sea was really magnificent.In the morning We played at the seaside.In the afternoon we collected shells.They were beautiful,we like there very much.Then I climbed the mountain.We got home at twenty thirty.这几句话有没有问题?

They were beautiful后应为句号 后一句应为We like them very much. 最后一句got可改为went