帮我看看这个英语句子 有没有错误Somost college graduates have avoided the countryside and flocked to China’metropolitan areas, such as Beijing, Shanghai, and Shenzhen, to find job.

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so most of the college students just don't want to go back to the countryside where they grew up,and flocked to those developed coastal cities like Beijing, Shanghai, and Shenzhen,just to find jobs

So most college graduates have avoided the countryside and flocked to Chinese’
metropolitan areas, such as Beijing, Shanghai, and Shenzhen, to find jobs.

这个句子不应该用现在完成时吧?应该是一种普遍存在的现象,以前有,现在也有.所以用一般现在时就可以了.Most college graduates avoide the countryside and flock to China's metropolitan areas, such as Beijing, S...

除了China'没加s（笔误吧）没错误