帮我看看这句话 有语病吗 有的话 该如何改this article,written for men who are non-smokers from this country,analyses.中间的written for men who are non-smokers from this country,这个
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帮我看看这句话 有语病吗 有的话 该如何改
this article,written for men who are non-smokers from this country,analyses.中间的written for men who are non-smokers from this country,这个
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This article,is written for men who are non-smokers in this country,analyses......
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from 改成 in 吧。。。
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没什么大问题啊,就是介词from改为in就ok了
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This article, written for non-smokers in the country, analyses ......