帮忙看一下这段英语有没有错误Guangdong Province ancient times always is “hundred races” the housing region,the Qing government has established Guangdong Province in here,therefore Guangdong's name continues to use until now.Here was our country's rich and populous place since old times,as early as already had the foreign trade and cultural exchange in the the Qin and Han Dynasty time,to the modern times,Guangdong becomes the commercial developed area.As a result of

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帮忙看一下这段英语有没有错误
Guangdong Province ancient times always is “hundred races” the housing region,the Qing government has established Guangdong Province in here,therefore Guangdong's name continues to use until now.Here was our country's rich and populous place since old times,as early as already had the foreign trade and cultural exchange in the the Qin and Han Dynasty time,to the modern times,Guangdong becomes the commercial developed area.As a result of the geography condition and the historical origin,here also is township of the overseas Chinese,many aliens stemming from could return to home village to the hometown sentiment of attachment,to promote the Guangdong Province tourism development frequently.
主要看一下有没有语法错误.还有看看可不可以把句子断成短一点的句子,我要演讲用的.

第二行in去掉,here就做状语,
第三行 to be used it was。。。
as early as the Qin and Han Dynasty time,which already had the foreign trade and cultural exchange
Guangdong becomes----has become a。。。it is also。。。
alien是外星人啊!

错误很多,似乎是用机器翻译的,很遗憾.