高手帮忙看看这样写行不行:Please come to join us with the annual dinner of our company...是一则通知公司同事吃年饭的函:Dear all,Please come to join us with the annual dinner of our company in the evening of February 3rd.It's in Jinman restraurant,Bingjiang road.Looking forward to your coming.
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高手帮忙看看这样写行不行:Please come to join us with the annual dinner of our company...
是一则通知公司同事吃年饭的函:
Dear all,
Please come to join us with the annual dinner of our company in the evening of February 3rd.It's in Jinman restraurant,Bingjiang road.
Looking forward to your coming.
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三楼已经点评的很精辟了
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LZ没问题了啦！文采那么好撒。。。
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with换成at
dinner换成banquet比较好
restaurant,拼写不对,R要大写
your coming -〉your presents
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Dear colleagues,
Please come and join us in the annual dinner of our company in the evening of February 3rd. It's in Jinman restraurant, Bingjiang road.
Looking forward to your coming.
说的挺好的~