短文改错：I was terrible at the math.I had just failed a test.And my little cat had just died.I was in low spirit.My math teacher saw this and pulls me aside.He told me a time in his life when everything were going wrong.He thought,"That's it!It"s over!I"m a loser!"But all that he discovered late was,No.Though life is a river,always moving.When you have a lot of bad stuff happened,remember that doesn't mean you will ever succeed.Life is not a dirt pond.Fre
短文改错：I was terrible at the math.I had just failed a test.And my little cat had just died.
I was in low spirit.My math teacher saw this and pulls me aside.He told me a time in his life when everything were going wrong.He thought,"That's it!It"s over!I"m a loser!"But all that he discovered late was,No.Though life is a river,always moving.When you have a lot of bad stuff happened,remember that doesn't mean you will ever succeed.Life is not a dirt pond.Fresh water is lowing down from the source and on their way.
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I was terrible at math.I had just failed (the) test.And my little cat had just died.I was in low (spirits).My math teacher saw this and (pulled) me aside.He told me a time in his life when everything (was) going wrong.He thought," That's it!It's over!I'm a loser!" But all that he discovered (later) was,No.(Becasue) life is a river,always moving.When you have a lot of bad stuff (happening),remember (在that后面加入it) doesn't mean you will (never) succeed.Life is not a dirt pond.Fresh water is flowing down from the source and on (its) way.