英语作文语法Should we attend training classes?Today,it is becoming increasingly popular that students choose to have training classes in part time in order to gain higher marks in a variety of tests such as TEM.Graduate candidate test and so on.Should these training classes be favored?When it comes to training classes,some think that is necessary,the other consider that is only wasting time and money.Just like a coin has two sides,training classes have adva

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Should we attend training classes?
Today,it is becoming increasingly popular that students choose to have training classes in part time in order to gain higher marks in a variety of tests such as TEM.Graduate candidate test and so on.Should these training classes be favored?
When it comes to training classes,some think that is necessary,the other consider that is only wasting time and money.Just like a coin has two sides,training classes have advantages.First,we can know the subject and its goal clearly.Teachers will give us a logical summary and point out the importance.Second,we can make up the knowledge loopholes.Combined with self-study,training classes can be more valuable.Training classes also have disadvantages.First,it will upset our study plan.With attending training classes,we have to catch buses or ride bicycles.Since the weather is bas,sometimes we can’t arrive at training schools.Second,it will cost a great deal of money,which will increase financial pressure for our students especially for some poor students.
Third,not all teachers are appropriate to you.Teachers` method and teaching style are different that may not fit for us.
Although training classes are profitable for some students who can’t control themselves well,I prefer studying by ourselves.According to our different circumstances,we can control and allocate time freely and reasonably.It a effective way to company with another student who has the same goal with us.Exchanging our study material,we can obtain more knowledge.Encouraging each other,we can gain more courage.Having a good habit to study and rest is beneficial to study and health.
As for as I am concerned,we’d better pass tests by themselves.It a good time to improve our self-control and self-study ability.
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第三段:
1only wasting time and money 改为 a waste of time and money.
2 前后句不统一
Just like a coin has two sides, training classes have advantages 。 加 and disadvantages.
3 这部分语义有重复。When it comes to training classes, some think that is necessary, the other consider that is only wasting time and money. Just like a coin has two sides, training classes have advantages.
改为:When it comes to training classes, some think that is necessary. First ....second....
再过渡。Just like a coin has two sides, training classes also has its disadvantages.
The others consider that is only a wase of time and money......

可惜这里不能显示不同的颜色或加下划线.我直接改在上面了,加个括号表示好了Should we attend training classes?Today,it (has become) increasingly popular that students choose to have training classes in part...