英语老师来帮我看看哈,能得多少分这作文,30分的介绍家乡的,Laoyin mountain,a typical symbol of south Gejiu in Yn Province,leave me a great impression with its oldest history.Wherever I am,I find it hard to resist the tempting call of the mountain.There are lots of things of interest,such as classical temple,greener grass,steady trees and so on.Climbing the mountain,You'll easily find there are many grocers selling snacks,and some tanks with colourful fishes.It is a comfortable tr

英语老师来帮我看看哈,能得多少分这作文,30分的
介绍家乡的,
Laoyin mountain,a typical symbol of south Gejiu in Yn Province,leave me a great impression with its oldest history.Wherever I am,I find it hard to resist the tempting call of the mountain.There are lots of things of interest,such as classical temple,greener grass,steady trees and so on.Climbing the mountain,You'll easily find there are many grocers selling snacks,and some tanks with colourful fishes.It is a comfortable treat of breathing the fresh air in the mountain.You may be attracted entirely when you climb it.So,let's we climb and enjoy it