On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London,and v

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On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London,and visit the British Museum and some parks.But I have spent lot my money,so I cannot even go out of town.I may go to a film,or a concert.Yes,a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music.So then,a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music,I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.If I listen to my own records,there are no need to spend money.All right.That’s how I' m going to do.
一行:划掉myself ;a 改为the 第二行:visit 改为visiting 第三行:my前加of 第四行:excited 改为exciting 第五行:So改为But 第六行:cost改为costs;giving改为given 第七行:are改为is第八行:how改为what

1.want to do 就是自己想做什么,不加反身代词了2.visiting 是跟making 并列,作为think of 的宾语3.lot 不能单独使用, lots of,或者a lot of 4.excited 指人感到兴奋,说事物、事情令人兴奋的特质,那么用exciting5....