大家看一下我写的英语作文(初一写的)Do you know me,my friends?My name's Steven Yuan.I am 12 years old.I like eating chicken,apples and bananas,but I don't like carrots at all.As for sports,I like playing baseball,but I don't like playing soccer or tennis.My favorite colour is blue,but I hate black.This is me!提点儿意见!不对的地方请帮我改正谢谢!

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大家看一下我写的英语作文(初一写的)
Do you know me,my friends?My name's Steven Yuan.I am 12 years old.
I like eating chicken,apples and bananas,but I don't like carrots at all.As for sports,I like playing baseball,but I don't like playing soccer or tennis.My favorite colour is blue,but I hate black.
This is me!
提点儿意见!不对的地方请帮我改正谢谢!

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Do you know me,my friends?(建议不要,老外不这么用.)My name's Steven Yuan.I am 12 years old.(My name's Steven Yuan,12.比较地道)I like eating chicken,apples and bananas,but I don't like carrots at al...