帮忙看看我的英语作文有什么错Mei Fang has been to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she likes Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there is Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and other famous Disneyland characters.And they walk around Disneyland all the time.It is so interesting to see.Though in the amusement park have rollar coaster,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on.The amusement park is really not as funny as Disneyland.So,she h

Mei Fang has been to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she likes Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there are Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and other famous Disneyland characters.And they can walk around Disneyland all the time.It is so interesting to see.Though in the amusement park have rollar coaster,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on.The amusement park is really not as funny as Disneyland.So,she hopes that she can go to Disneyland next time.
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Mei Fang had been to an amusement park in Guangzhou.She did not enjoy it because she liked Disneyland better.In Disneyland,there was Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and other famous Disneyland characters.And they walked around Disneyland all the time.It is so interesting to see
this view.Though the amusement park has rollar coaster,,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on.The amusement park is really not as fun as Disneyland.So,she hopes that she could go to Disneyland next time.

Though in the amusement park have rollar coaster,and she could also boating,climbing,flying kites and so on.这句话改成Though there is rollar coaster in the amusement and she could also go boating,clim...