my father will tell me a story to me this night这句话有何错误?请指出并改正写错了应为my father will tell a story to me this night
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my father will tell me a story to me this night
这句话有何错误?请指出并改正
写错了
应为my father will tell a story to me this night
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tome去掉
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Tell me a story.
Tell sb something or Tell sb about something
没有tell sth to sb...
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my father will tell a story to me this night
可以！
my father will tell me a story this night
可以！
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My father will tell me a story this night. 把 to me 去掉 ， 重复了。
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my father will tell me a story tonight
把 to me 去掉 ,重复了
this night 格外非正常,tonight 即可
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tell me与 to me重复
应为：my father will tell me a story this night