请牛人帮忙看看下面写的有没有错的地方帮忙改正
请牛人帮忙看看下面写的有没有错的地方帮忙改正
Today,we talk about how to make an appointment with doctor.In America,as a rule you should make an appointment before see a doctor if you have sick.There is a exceptional case that you get acute disease can see a doctor directly.
The following conversation will tell us how to make an appointment by call if we fall ill.
Please listen to me：
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This dialogue contain some new words and phrases,i need to explain.
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.the sentence is content of this class.
.ok.This class give us a knowledge of seeing adoctor.Please remember.
这是课堂教学的翻译,请兄弟们帮忙,
Today,we （这里如果是将要讨论这个内容的话,要用we are going to talk about）talk about how to make an appointment with a doctor.In America,it's almost like a rule that you should make an appointment before seeing the doctor if you are sick.There is a exceptional case if you got acute disease :you can go ask for treatment directly.
The following conversation will teach us how to make an appointment through the phone （既然预约肯定是病了,所以不用重复比较好~）.
Please listen to me：
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This dialogue contains some new words and phrases,i will explain right now（或者at this moment）.
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.the sentence is content of this class.(不确定你这里要说什么,只有一句话么?不过这句语法没什么问题)
.ok.This class gives us the knowledge of seeing a doctor by making an appointment first.Please keep this fresh in mind.
有些句子大体没什么问题不过我还是改了,因为说起来非常不顺畅,太过书面.
如果有任何问题,欢迎追问~谢谢，那兄弟再帮我看一下我的这个自我介绍有没有上面问题hello，everyone！I'm 。。。，born in anhui，south of china 。I graduated from anhui normal university in july ，2010. My major is politics education。I studied courses such as education and psychic。