Many thanks for your kind consideration and the help you gave me during the preparing of my application recently.It was

Many thanks for your kind consideration and the help you gave me during the preparing of my application recently.It was really nice of you and Mr MacCrae to help me get through such a hard work.I do not need to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me these days and how grateful I am for the encouragement and modification you gave me when I needed them so desperately.I can't even imagine what I can do with the rubbish that I wrote:)
I will set about applying for universities,including Warwick,as soon as possible,as you have told the time is very limited.I will do my best to do this job,and try to not to disapoint your concern.I think the result will come about one month later.
Thank you again for everything you have done for me!Have a nice trip!