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Currently,a new lifestyle called green living is spreading __________ every corner of the world.A green living is environmentally friendly,which means living with low energy and no waste and pollution.
There are several reasons why people attach greater importance to the green living,Energy crisis comes first.With the development of industry.The world has consumed a great amount of energy.However ,energy supplies are limited ,which requires a green life-style to deal with the energy in the future.The environment pollution also makes this new lifestyle called for.Serious pollution leads to a problem that our society development is afftected.
In my own life ,I take some effect measure to live a green living .Such as using each side of paper ,taking bike instead of using petrol-using cars.
also makes this new lifestyle
a problem that our society development is afftected.
Such as
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Currently,a new lifestyle called green living is spreading (at) every corner of the world.
(A) green living(一种生活方式,Green living） is environmentally friendly,which means living with low energy and no waste and pollution.
There are several reasons why people attach greater importance to the green living,
Energy crisis comes first.
With the development of industry.The world has consumed a great amount of energy.
However ,energy supplies are limited ,which requires a green life-style to deal with the energy in the future.
The environment pollution also makes this new lifestyle called for(necessary）.
Serious pollution leads to a problem（problems) that our society development is afftected.
In my own life ,I take some effect measure（measures） to live a green living（life） .Such as using each side of paper ,taking bike instead of （using） petrol-using cars.