检查一下这篇很简单的英语短文有没有语法错误 尽快～88 Zhongshan RoadShanghai200020P.R.ChinaDear Wilson,How are you?I have received the T-shirt which you sent to me as a gift.What a beautiful T-shirt it is!The colour of it attracts me a lot and the T-shirt is a beautiful fit.Yesterday I had a birthday party.Many people were invited to the party.We didn’t come to an end until 11:30p.m.Smmer holiday is coming,what’s your plan for it?Yoursxxx你们回答什么都给可以阿 送积分给你啊
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检查一下这篇很简单的英语短文有没有语法错误 尽快～
88 Zhongshan Road
Shanghai
200020
P.R.China
Dear Wilson,
How are you?I have received the T-shirt which you sent to me as a gift.What a beautiful T-shirt it is!The colour of it attracts me a lot and the T-shirt is a beautiful fit.Yesterday I had a birthday party.Many people were invited to the party.We didn’t come to an end until 11:30p.m.Smmer holiday is coming,what’s your plan for it?
Yours
xxx
你们回答什么都给可以阿 送积分给你啊
答
The colour of it attracts me a lot and the T-shirt is a beautiful fit
这句看着就不怎么舒服,你可以改为我很满意之类的话就好了吧
Smmer holiday 单词错误～