能不能 介绍自己家庭的 短文~

Talk about My Family
My name is XX.I am from a big family.There are 6 people in my family.They are my grandfather,my grandmother,my maternal grandmother,my father,my mother and I.
It is ordinary but warm.Every member in my family live in harmony（和睦地）.Grandparents are living a leisure life of the elderly - watching TV at home everyday.They often tell me interesting stories in old days.Sorry for maternal grandmother,she's ill in hospital,but we will look after her in turn.As a worker,my father has to keep working out all the year round.But he would telephone us serval times a week and often send me gifts.My mother is an amazing and exraordiary woman,she dealt with all the things home orderly although my father's away from home throughout the year.I am a middle school student.And I am going to study hard to repay my parents.
That is my family.We love each other devotedly.