【急】这段英文有错误么,帮我修改下,Good morning,everyone.it's my honor to stand here and give you a show.my name is *** .Do you know?It’s movie about a love story between Jack Dawson and Rose DeWitt Bukater.I was really touched by this movie,so that’s why i wanna share the movie with you.I hope you will like the show that we prepare for you.Now,let's applaud for *** to give a introduction.有语法错误么,或者给我修改下,有更好的句子吗?

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【急】这段英文有错误么,帮我修改下,
Good morning,everyone.it's my honor to stand here and give you a show.my name is *** .Do you know?It’s movie about a love story between Jack Dawson and Rose DeWitt Bukater.I was really touched by this movie,so that’s why i wanna share the movie with you.I hope you will like the show that we prepare for you.Now,let's applaud for *** to give a introduction.
有语法错误么,或者给我修改下,有更好的句子吗?

it is a movie about the love story between.......
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Good morning,everyone.my name is *** it's my pleasure to stand here and take a show.And now Iwant to ask you Do you knowthe ? It’s a romantic film about a love story between Jack Dawson and Rose De...