请帮忙改一篇英语作文,字数不够需要添加,希望帮忙补充Walking along the road,I met someone really familiar.But what surprised me the most was that i found him look just like me!He was also shocked.Then we had a talk.Only during the conversation then i realized that he was myself 20 years later.I told him that my dream is to be a doctor.He replied to me galdly that I succeeded in becoming a doctor that saved many people's life.However,i was very blurred about my future then."Drea
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Walking along the road,I met someone really familiar.But what surprised me the most was that i found him look just like me!He was also shocked.Then we had a talk.Only during the conversation then i realized that he was myself 20 years later.
I told him that my dream is to be a doctor.He replied to me galdly that I succeeded in becoming a doctor that saved many people's life.However,i was very blurred about my future then."Dreams are still dreams to me.I am still fighting for a future with a large uncertainty,It stills seems to be obscure for me."
"One reaps no more than what he has sown.Have faith in yourself!Keep on trying!The future will become clearer,because I am exactly who you will be in the future!"
I was really inspired by him and made up my mind before he left me and got back to his on life.
After this fancy encounter i was more determined on my dream!I would not hesitate or stop any more!
字数至少要250 可致谢却不足希望补充
只是我原来的中文意思
在路边,迎面走来一位既陌生而又十分熟悉的人,令我猛地一惊的是,他长得和我出奇的像,他也很诧异.在谈话得知,他便是二十年后的我.
我告诉他我的梦想是做一名一声,他很高兴地告诉我,我成功了,成功的做了一名救死扶伤的医生.我很苦恼地倾诉“梦很遥远,我现在的拼搏只是为了都一个不确定的未来,这一路困难重重,我有些迷茫和纠结.”“百炼成钢,相信你自己,未来会逐渐清晰的.因为我就是你!”我似乎想通了,而他也说他要走了,就这样,我们又再次踏上各自的征途.
一次奇妙的邂逅,让我更加明确坚定自己的梦想,将不惧艰难,勇往直前!
希望适当添加到字数够250个就好!适当发挥不利主题
【I walk on the road,-(可改成我走在路上、这样句子更完整)】 I met someone really familiar. But what surprised me the most was that i found him look just like me! He was also shocked. Then we had a talk. Only during the conversation then i realized that he was myself 20 years later.
I told him that my dream is to be a doctor. He replied to me galdly that I succeeded in becoming a doctor that saved many people's life. However, i was very blurred about my future then. "Dreams are still dreams to me. I am still fighting for a future with a large uncertainty, It stills seems to be obscure for me."
"One reaps no more than what he has sown. Have faith in yourself! Keep on trying! The future will become clearer, because I am exactly who you will be in the future!"
I was really inspired by him and made up my mind before he left me and got back to his on life.【Wonderful encounter, let me be clear and firm your dreams, will not fear the
difficult, march forward courageously!!!-一次奇妙的邂逅,让我更加明确坚定自己的梦想,将不惧艰难,勇往直前!!!(改)】
其他的地方都可以,就这些改下就ok了!
祝学习进步!
On the side of the road, came a strange and familiar, I suddenly surprised is, he looks and I was like, he was very surprised. In the conversation, he is after twenty years I.
I told him my dream is to be a sound, he was pleased to tell me, and I succeeded, the success of a heal the wounded and rescue the dying doctor. I was distressed to say "the dream is far away, now I struggle just to have an uncertain future, the road is difficult, I confused and tangled." "Be toughened and hardened into steel, believe in yourself, the future will gradually clear. Because I am you!!" I seem to be figured out, and he said he would go, so, we again set foot on their journey.
A wonderful encounter, let me be clear and firm your dreams, will not fear the difficult, march forward courageously!!!
添加到字数255.
Walking along the road,I met someone really familiar.But what surprised me the most was that I found him look just like me but older!He was also shocked.Then we had a talk.Only during the conversation then I realized that he was I myself 20 years later.We have the same name,the same birthday and the same parents,but the year on my calendar is 2013 while the year on his calendar is 2033!
I told him that my dream is to be a doctor.He replied to me gladly that I had succeeded in becoming a well-respected doctor who had saved many lives.However,I was very blurred about my future then."Dreams are still dreams to me.I am still fighting for a future with a large uncertainty;it still seems to be obscure for me."
"One reaps no more than what he has sown.Work hard and have faith in yourself!Fixing your eyes at your goal and never give up!The future will become clearer,because I am exactly who you will be in the future!"
I was really inspired by him and made up my mind before he left me and got back to his own life.
This fancy encounter with the future me has changed my life.Since then I have become very determined on my goal and never worried about obstacles in front of me.I do not hesitate or stop any more!I am confidently working hard and marching towards my bright future.