帮我看看这英语作文有木有错误.My family is composed of five people.Mum,dad,grandma,grandpa and I.Here are only love,consideration and harmony.Only these,no other things.I love my family.
问题描述：
帮我看看这英语作文有木有错误.
My family is composed of five people.Mum,dad,grandma,grandpa and I.Here are only love,consideration and harmony.Only these,no other things.I love my family.
答
其实可以再举一些例子,比如说你们的丰富的活动,一家人怎样和睦相处,大家怎么疼你等等.