下面病句从4个选项选择一个错误并修改4I (walked) (down) the corridor, my footsteps (echoed) eerily (through) the empty house.

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下面病句从4个选项选择一个错误并修改4
I (walked) (down) the corridor, my footsteps (echoed) eerily (through) the empty house.

把echoed 改为echoing

echoing 这里是一个独立结构,表示伴随情况,其主语my footsteps与前面的主语I不一致。
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把第三个用作谓语动词的 echoed  改为现在分词 echoing.解析:I (walked) (down) the corridor 和my footsteps (echoed) eerily (through) the empty house  显而易见是两个分句.分句之间用逗号连接是错误...