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正侧面描写人物作文

习作要求 这次作文不出题目,请你*写,详见人教社小学《语文》第十册积累·运用七。习作指导 这次作文不出题目,可以*写。老师就从写人写事这一角度出发,谈谈怎样用几件事来写好一个人。 一、J七科.亨要和诺坟一 事情多了,不能一件事一个中心,如果哪个问题都想说,哪个问题也没说透,这样的文章是不会给人留下什么印象的。因此用儿件事写一个人,必须处理好材料与中心的关系,事情之间不能互为矛盾,要和谐统一,突出表现人物一个或几个方面的特点和品质。如《*在花山》这篇课文,作者介绍了*在花山的三件事:第一件是警卫员怕群众在*住处门口的花椒树下碾米影响*工作,让村长动员群众到远处去碾米。*知道后批评了警卫员,并让他尽快把乡亲们请到这里来碾米(详写)。第二件是*让警卫员把在南方工作的同志送来的,舍不得喝的茶叶泡成茶,送给碾米的乡亲喝(详写)。第三件是*帮乡亲推碾子(略写)。这三件事共同表现了伟大领袖对人民群众的关心、爱护,平易近人和群众心连心的优秀品质。 又如《表妹的坏脾气》,文章通过“表妹跟妈妈赌气,被妈妈打了,却宁肯挨打却不躲开”

自己想...用其它描写来衬托人物呗

That the family is sitting , sunlight in the afternoon is streaming into makes two cheek of her especially rosy on the round face arriving at her,; She is supporting cheek with hand , the slow swim of bright eye of crystal is burning , full-grown lower jaw mounts the expression curling up when this is that she dopes out the problem coming to resolve a mathematics more ingenious method everytime , what known well that , been fond of by mathematics teacher slightly in big eye sockets of Zhang. The rustle makes a sound whenever I make school assignment time , nib , is just like birdie in singing to me , seems to be encouraging me: "You need to be not afraid of difficulty , are bold in scaling heights ". She starts having stood up , answering so accurate , so natural , so fluent, as if the morning is prepared. The field is reciting her high and low , the tone is graceful , a very plausible way of talking , all the attendance are looking moved. His this mischievous ghost , book have read very quickly , have been stricken by splitting the clap clap, look like being to stir-fry a peanut kernel. That graceful graceful use putonghua reads text , sound aloud crispy and fresh , is pleasant to hear very much, even sunlight listen to such that being fascinated, drill has entered a classroom secretly from window , has fallen to her book, be unwilling to leave for a long , long time. I am reading a book avariciously, like that one hunger lamb bursts in the light green grassplot of fragrant grass. In her voluminous drilling books, if the fish son has entered ocean, efflux having forgot time. He forces a book to buck up energy , turns open, begin to feel the capable character needs to fly in above, using personal influence , looking as if right away; Feel like in the afterwards however hazy slice, crawl arbitrarily like a nest of ant on paper. He buries self in writing school assignment up coming , in the room very quiet, the god of the earth hears fountain pen sound mounting the rustle writing in paper. Schoolmates sit within the classroom , listen to a teacher very attentively give a lecture, such as several tens flower potting being bearing the industrious gardener in very quiet field. The sound of reading aloud flies out from each classrooms , chorus , the musical note are skyful like moving child's voice. Good sentence: The sky be overcast with Hong Yun , full Haijinbo, the red day spurts out such as one boiling stove molten steel, golden light is dazzling. The sun resembles the bride who just goes out in the morning,come showing half face bashfully. The sun has set , its out-of-duty glare has jetted out from treetop, dye white cloud with redness of the skin , dye the green hill with redness of the skin.

他是坦率的人,他从来不会对人有任何掩饰,他的一字一句,都是来自他的心;但是他却总因为这样伤害了别人。

发生在作文兴趣班里的一件事 今天早晨,我兴致勃勃地来到了久违的作文兴趣班.我走到作文兴趣班门前,一推开门,就被眼前的狼狈影像惊呆了:桌椅杂乱无章地摆放着,地上到处是粉笔灰和白花花的小纸片,粉笔、塑料袋横七竖...

是她滋润着我们这些娇嫩的祖国之花,她就像辛勤的园丁一样,哺育我们成长,传授我们知识.她,中等身材,有一头棕色的卷发,洁白的瓜子脸,高高的鼻梁上架着一副眼镜,罩着她那双沉稳得来又明亮的眼睛。还有一张能说会道的巧嘴以及一对灵敏的耳朵。她平易进人,上课非常认真。讲课时,她常把难题用生活中的事例或者一些历史故事来分析给我们听,让我们一边听故事一边学知识,使我百听不厌。
有一次,有位同学在课堂上讲悄悄话,被她发现了。那时她正面对着黑板写字,我不知道她是怎样发现的,可能是她的耳朵真的像顺风耳一样吧。那位同学被她罚站了,可我看得出那位同学很不情愿站起来,是啊,有谁又想被老师批评呢!但面对着她,他还是无奈地站了起来。
无时无刻,都是她昼夜不停地为我们操心:深夜里,我们已经进入了甜美的梦乡,而她却在皎洁的月光下,微微的灯光下为我们批改作业;白天,她又站在讲台上,引领我们进入知识的海洋,在知识的海洋里遨游。她认真地去把每一粒种子传播给我们,并让它发芽、开花、结果,结出一堆硕大、饱满、甜美的果实……她是谁,不用说你们已经知道,她就是我们最敬佩、最熟悉的人——老师。