In order to keep my parentsDear Editor, In order to keep my parents happy, I never went to 1.__________ Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding 2.____________ place. I like reading books or doing my homework 3.____________ at home while listening to music. But when during 4._____________ every winter holiday, my home becomes a playroom. 5._____________ Many relatives gather here to play the cards. I am 6._____________ very tired of the noise th
In order to keep my parents
Dear Editor, In order to keep my parents happy, I never went to 1.__________ Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding 2.____________ place. I like reading books or doing my homework 3.____________ at home while listening to music. But when during 4._____________ every winter holiday, my home becomes a playroom. 5._____________ Many relatives gather here to play the cards. I am 6._____________ very tired of the noise the game makes, so my 7._____________ parents enjoy it. How I hope at a quiet place to 8._____________ read books or learn something that they cannot get 9______________ at school without disturbed!Please help me!
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3place->places
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8at->in
9去掉they
10 disturbde->disturbing