let us take action together to make a difference to do sth .这话有没有语法错误?顺便帮我造几句话。

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let us take action together to make a difference to do sth .
这话有没有语法错误?
顺便帮我造几句话。

有错 make a difference to do sth

let us work together to make a difference in sth./ for sb.
感觉这样会顺一点