请帮忙检查一下这句是否有语法错误,并改正.She discussed how difficult the women writers publish their work and how unfairly it was for they were treated compared to other,especially men writers.

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请帮忙检查一下这句是否有语法错误,并改正.
She discussed how difficult the women writers publish their work and how unfairly it was for they were treated compared to other,especially men writers.

She discussed how difficult the women writers publish their works and how unfair the way was in which they were treated compared to other,especially men writers.
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