求修改英文自传语法错误QAQ急非常感谢

求修改英文自传语法错误QAQ急非常感谢
这是我申请大学要用的今晚就要交了
非常感谢QAQ
不常用百度知道.我很穷请不要嫌弃悬赏很低
My name is .;
I was born in Mainland China in Xi’an. I have an ordinary but happy family, and my parents very love me. Meanwhile, the road in more than ten years of schooling, I almost not met any big setbacks. From junior to senior high school, I have maintained the high honors in the class. I often attend various writing contest and acquire good grades, since I am very interested in writing, actually, as far as I am concerned that these competitions are very precious experience; they encourage me to become more confident especially when I got good grades.
I also performed very well in English, and often get the first in exam. In my opinion, my English teacher has helped me a lot in my English learning, the encourages of her gave me a great deal of confident. She can answer my confusion in the learning patiently,and she often lend me the English magazine and her favorite books. Throughout reading these interesting books and magazines, not only let my English ability gets a huge leap and let me like English more, but also firm my confidence to learn English better.
In high school three years, I served as Chief of books, class representatives, vice squad and chemistry class representative. These cadres as experiences has thought me a lot, including honed my ability to handle things and let me know we should be responsible
I do volunteer service in the community regularly, to help clean up the environment.
I voluntarily enrolled in the school to donate blood When sophomore.
I like American movies, because they has funny plot and stunning motion effects. Meanwhile, listening the music and singing are also my integral part of my life, whatever English, Chinese or Japanese. Finally,Reading the novels are my favorite; by the author's description, I can immersive and learn many different exotic.