We have just sold our house and were in the process of moving.While tidied up the house,my mother filled a large contain
We have just sold our house and were in the process of moving.While tidied up the house,my mother filled a large container with colorful plant.One night,when l arrived home after school,l found something surprised:the container was filled with bones and the other dog foods!My dog.Zane was not leaving his precious foods behind!Seeing we were packing up to leave,Zane had decided that it was time of him to start packing,either.He had taken all plants from the container and laid out neatly on the floor,break only two plants.He had then put into it his own foods what he had found in the house.
1.have去掉（just应该为一般过去时态）
2.tidied 应改为 tidying（因为相当于 while my mother was tidying up the house）
3.plant 应该为plants(为可数名词并且后文有暗示)
4.surprised 应该为surprising（用来修饰物的）
5.had decided中的had去掉
6.of him 中的of 应该为for
7.either 应该为 too(肯定句中用too,否定句中用either)
8.taken 后面加out
9.break 应该为 breaking （非谓语动词,表示伴随的动作）
10.what 应该为which/that/去掉（定语从句）
这是我认为的应该改动的地方,