急求解析短文改错

急求解析短文改错
Dear Jim,
Many thanks for the wonderful present you was sent me.I'd like tell you about my trip to Emei.Mountain in my summer holiday.The beautiful mountain lies in.Sichuan.Province,that is well-known as a most beautiful mountain under heaven".There are too many scenic spots,like.Palaces in.Clouds,leshan Giant.Buddha,that we cannot help admire its beauty.I enjoy it's great waterfalls,tall ancient trees,and abundant flower along the paths.Sadly,I hate them when visitors throw all kinds of rubbish careless.Anyway,it's worth visiting.l hope you can pay a visit to the the mountain ,either.l'm happy to be your guide.