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Tsingdao is a clean city with fresh air,especially,there are many red roofs which have Chinese feature.I think Tsingdao is very suitable for settling down.Unlike the noisy situation in Beijing or Shanghai,however Tsingdao is a romantic modern city.

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Tsingdao is a clean city with fresh air.There are many Chinese featured building with red roofs.I think Tsingdao is very suitable for settling down.Unlike the noisy environment in Beijing or Shanghai,Tsingdao is a quiet and romantic modern city.