要个作文：My Happy vacation求大神帮助

Do you think everyone enjoys their vacation?Some people does,but others does not.My deam is visit to Benjing,because I think Beijing is a good place to visit.Last summer vacation,my deam come true,I went to Beijing with my famliy,so my last vacation was happy as for me.What great weather ,ti was sunny and hot all day,so we swam at pool,we had great fun playing in the water,After it,Iwant to the Palace Museum with my father,the Palace Museumis very famous in world,so there were really interesting but king of crowded,Ithink I can learn about Chinese history there.Than,we visited the Great Wall,there was very beautiful,we took many photos there,it was 9 o'clock in the evening,so we walked back to the hotel,we were lots of tired but we were also happy.After morning,the weather was rainy,we went shoping,I bount clothes for my good friend,the clothes were very beautiful but king of expensive,and shops were also crowded,I don't like there.It was time to have for lunch,we ate Beijing Duck,it was delicious,that made me feel very happy.Afternoon,we want to Tian'an Men Square ,but I don't like there,I think it's boring.I spent boring day.