She was not amused.中译英 (大家帮我看看哪写错啦,Monday November.22nd 2010 CloudyJeremy Hampden has a large circle of friends,who is welcome at kinds of parties.Everyone admires his great sense of humor except his six-year-old daughter,Jenny.Recently,a nearest friend of Jeremy’s invited him to give congratulation at a wedding reception,which Jeremy liked doing.He prepared speech seriously to attend the wedding with Jenny.Lots of humor stories were added in his cong
She was not amused.中译英 (大家帮我看看哪写错啦,
Monday November.22nd 2010 Cloudy
Jeremy Hampden has a large circle of friends,who is welcome at kinds of parties.Everyone admires his great sense of humor except his six-year-old daughter,Jenny.Recently,a nearest friend of Jeremy’s invited him to give congratulation at a wedding reception,which Jeremy liked doing.He prepared speech seriously to attend the wedding with Jenny.Lots of humor stories were added in his congratulation,so he was very successful.As soon as he finished it,Jenny told him that she wanted to return home.It dissatisfied him.But he did according to his daughter.On the way home,he asked jenny whether to like his congratulation.It was surprising that she said she didn’t like it.She said she wouldn’t like to see so many people laughing at him.
第一行who is 改为who are,nearest改为closest,his speech加一个his,humorous stories,贺词多用复数congratulations
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Monday November.22nd 2010 CloudyJeremy Hampden,WHO IS WELCOME AT ALL KINDS OF PARTIES,has a large circle of friends.Everyone admires his great sense of humor except his six-year-old daughter,Jenny.Rec...
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