英语翻译Thanks!You do very well.The writings are meaningful and they contain few mistakes.Just pay more attention to attributive clauses.Read them again and find time to revise.Get rid of ACs which are unnecessary and correct the wrong ones.Try by yourself and I'll advise you later.尽量说得让人明白一点,用在线翻译的看了根本无法理解,
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英语翻译
Thanks!You do very well.The writings are meaningful and they contain few mistakes.Just pay more attention to attributive clauses.
Read them again and find time to revise.Get rid of ACs which are unnecessary and correct the wrong ones.
Try by yourself and I'll advise you later.
尽量说得让人明白一点,用在线翻译的看了根本无法理解,
答
谢谢! 你做得很好. 你的写作很有意义而且几乎没有什么错误.
只要要注意一下定语从句.
再读一遍,并且找时间把它订正了.
去掉不必要的定语从句并且把错误的订正了.
要自己做完,后面我会给你一些建议.