英语短文,有错误,改错A School-report The father was reading the school-report which had just been handed to him by his hopeful son.His brow was wrathful as he read:"English,poor,French,weak,mathematics,Fair," and he gave a glance of disgust at the quaking lad."Well,Dad." Said the son,"it is not as good as it might be,but have you seen that?" And he pointed to the next line,which read:"Health,excellent." 此短文我找出了几个错误,已经更正了,现在这里面还有什么错误?

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英语短文,有错误,改错
A School-report
The father was reading the school-report which had just been handed to him by his hopeful son.His brow was wrathful as he read:"English,poor,French,weak,mathematics,Fair," and he gave a glance of disgust at the quaking lad."Well,Dad." Said the son,"it is not as good as it might be,but have you seen that?" And he pointed to the next line,which read:"Health,excellent."
此短文我找出了几个错误,已经更正了,现在这里面还有什么错误?

第一行的had been 后面要接doing sth ,要改成which had just been handing

"Well, Dad." Said the son 中的“said”用小写
其他没有错误了

"Well,Dad," said the son,"it is not as good as it should be,...
Dad 后的句号应为逗号.