he had lost his way,looked worried.错在哪要原因哦!

问题描述:

he had lost his way,looked worried.错在哪要原因哦!

以下三句都是正确的,仔细阅读,你就知道错误在哪里:
1 He had lost his way and looked worried.-------简单句,用and连接
2 He had lost his way, looking worried.-------分词结构,没有and
3 Having lost his way, he looked worried. --------用完成式的分词结构,没有and

迷路不用过去完成时,用过去式即可。可以改成:“he lost his way,looked worried.”

两句话之间没有逻辑关系.应该改一下,比如改成:He looked worried when he had lost his way.