第一次写英文日志求纠正语法December 21,2008Icy coldThe weather is very cold But i must go to the school Because i must take a test .

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第一次写英文日志求纠正语法
December 21,2008
Icy cold
The weather is very cold But i must go to the school Because i must take a test .

用英文写日志我觉得不太好,因为自己错了也不知道,有些错误还会成为习惯,并不利于提高。
不知道你的but和because为什么变成了大写,如果是另起一句,记得在前面加句号。如果是一句话,楼主要注意不要在一句话里用太多连词,也不要随便大写词头。
go to the school 改成 go to school,“上学”不需要加the。
must改成have to,因为考试是你不情愿的。
第二个“I must...”因为前面重复了可以换一个说法。
总结:
The weather is very cold. But I have to go to school because there's a test today.

go to the school,没有the.
基本没有什么语法错误,就是句子可以再改得简练一点.
参考:It's very cold outside,but I have to go to school for an exam.