帮我修改一下我的英语作文,特别是语法的知识＿＿＿＿＿＿one day.Mr wang arrived in Beijing for a visit.when Mr wang arrvied he feel excited.And he look for a hotel and live.while.he fond lose a ID.Hefeels upset.So he look for in the hotel.He very worried.When Mr.wang get back the hotel.The hotel boss give back his ID,So Mr.wang say thank to boss.He look like happy.英语太差求人指点

One day.Mr wang arrived in Beijing for a visit.when Mr wang arrvied ,he felt excited.And he look for a hotel to live.when he found that he lost his ID.He felt upset.So he look for the hotel.He was very worried.When Mr.wang got back the hotel.The hotel boss give back his ID，So Mr.wang said thanks to the boss of the hotel.He look like happy.

One day,Mr wang went to Beijing for a visit. When he arrvied he felt excited. He found a hotel to live.Sunddenly he found his ID card was missing. He felt so upset that he was looking for it everywhere. He was very worried. When Mr.wang got back to the hotel. The hotel owner gave him his ID card back, Mr.wang said thank to boss.He looked happy again.
哥们，你这英语是吃力了点，只能尽力在你原文上修改了一下。

One day,Mr.Wang went to Beijing for a visit.When he arrived,he felt very excited.After he had found a hotel to live in and went out for shopping,he suddenly found his ID card lost.He felt so upset tha...